Estrellita Revisited

I read over Estrellita last night and I wasn't quite satisfied with it.  I remember working on it a while back and thinking that it was done.  As I read it yesterday, it just didn't have the flow that I intended. I am revisiting it now to see where it can go.

Estrellita

By Maureen  Ucles

Twinkle, twinkle 

Little star

Got me wonderin'

Estrellita

Where you are

Out in space

Light years away

Just twinkling

All the way 

to the Earth

and beyond

¿Cómo no?

You seem to

Twinkle here

Twinkle there

Twinkling

Just twinkling

anywhere

For what?

For whom?

Bells tolling 

and such

Seems all so full

of nothingness--

absurdity

Thought I heard

someone say

Hey, ya know

if you

twinkle

they will come

was it

James Earl Jones?

Maybe

Kevin Costner listening

Only in a field

 recently abandoned

Out in far right

 dreams unrealized

Put on hold

Thrown in the towel

 for the moment...

at least

Twinkle, twinkle

Como brilla

Tan contenta

Little star

Estrellita

Got me wonderin'

So far away

Oblivious to the day

That I might just

UP and WALK

Away

Wish it were 

today

right now

this instance

perhaps...

Tonight

seems to be

Great time to

take flight

Just might

Twinkle, twinkle

Casanova's nebulae

Hits me right 

in the eyes

In between

Primal scream

Falling down

down down

gravity's extreme

Twinkle, Twinkle

searching 

 respuestas

answers

to my ponderings

constant questionings

Trying to secure

some kinda meaning

signficanza

Devoid

Deleted

Delayed

Beyond belief

¿Quién sabe?

Re-placed

Re-moved

Re-jected

by a twinkle, twinkle

from someone else's eyes

all these years

 life, laughter

 and tears

                                                                      ¿Para qué?

Estellita dime

Tell me 

What did I do?

Por favorcito

Shine your light

Down upon me

Hazme brillar 

Just like before

When the world was new

Light years away

Yet

It cannot be

As for me

Stuck in a vaccuum

Paralysis of thought

emotion

Plain toast

burnt to the core

Don't wanna 

Hang out anymore

Just leave me alone

with your rayas

shut the door

in my face

as your beams

flow

out into space

Estrellita

Me voy

Movin' on

Andale pues

without haste

To a universe

far, far away

No más

Estrellita

Good bye

Adiós