Revision RADAR with Ms. U's class

Here is Ms. Urrutia's class poem.  She wanted me to share this.  She mentioned that her class had composed this recently.  Revision is important to Ms. Urrutia's class and so she wanted us to see the before and after shots using RADAR revision.  Replace, Add, Delete and Reorganize.  In Spanish it would be:
Reemplazar, Agregar or Anadir, Descarter, Ademas, Reorganizar!  Happy Reading in espanol!  Mil gracias!  Felicidades!  I can't figure out how to add accents and appropriate Spanish end punctuation.  If anyone reading this know, post it to the blog and keep us all abreast!  Please comment!  Thanks again!

Revised version using color.

Class Poem with changes added.